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Duplex

Honeymoon

Till death
us  do
depart
We vowed

Husband
new wife 
first night 
cold door
closed shut

Witching
hour pulsed
he changed

Black eye
broken 
sore ribs 
bruises

Till death
us  do
depart
one’s say


12/6/2016

DUPLEX - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: JAN ALLISON

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Date: 12/11/2016 5:05:00 AM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 12/11/2016 12:00:00 AM
Coming back to you with congratulations :)
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Date: 12/10/2016 10:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win Eve
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Date: 12/10/2016 8:01:00 PM
Strong poem on a heartbreaking topic - you say a lot with few words, Eve. Congrats on your win. Agnes
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Date: 12/10/2016 7:41:00 PM
Wow, very emotive write. Intense theme handled in two syllables well. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/10/2016 6:38:00 PM
Very powerfully penned Eve:-)Many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/7/2016 1:16:00 AM
Oh boy Eve, so horrible, so true and so powerful! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 12/7/2016 12:36:00 AM
Very sad indeed Eve - well written and compiled. Regards, Mark
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Date: 12/6/2016 11:08:00 PM
WOW, Eve. Great thinking . I am impressed.
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