Duo Manifesto Pt.2

Bip,bip,bip,
" A few years ago, you began a journey to find me,
and now you have" I was in a hospital! " You are still"
Is it you holding my hand? or is it Jesus?
" Both, we are one and both"

huh! " Yet, you know this don't you?" Yes!
" I am God and Jesus, My Son is Jesus and God,
we are one, we dwell together in as you would say
one spirit"

So I am still alive? "Yes, you have work yet to do with me"
What work? " The answer to that dwells within your heart,
our heart" " You see we are here, because you love me
and I you"

You saved my life? " No, my Son, you saved your own life,
by coming to this hospital when you felt pain in your heart,
our heart" " It was our relationship of love, that you did this"
" It was my love for you, that held your hand"

" It was also your love for me that guided the hand of the
physician who began the healing of our heart, and his love for you 
and me that gave him the ability". " It is now that we three
share a relationship" " I held your hand, he held our heart, you had
faith in us both, believed in us both and loved us both that allowed you 
to save yourself."

Bip,bip,bip,bip,bip,bip,bip,bip,bip,bip,bip,bip,bip,bip,

Will I see you again? " If it is needed, it may be a long time"
w" we will speak again, many times in many ways" " remember,
my Son, because you love me, have faith in me, believe in me
and truly wish me to dwell in you, I will always hold your hand."
" It is time for you to return, there are two other of my children,
waiting for you, who love us both"

bip,bip,bip,bip,bip,bip,bip,

Hi Dad! How do you feel?

And I wept................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/27/2010 10:18:00 AM
enjoyed reading today---
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Date: 4/8/2010 6:09:00 AM
True literature of life in His abundance in many phases, Richard. What a blessing in a thinly veiled disguise for you. Total disguise for others. You will draw on this for the rest of your mortal life, and as any other gift from God, it will expand exponentially through your cooperation with Him. I pray for wisdom and discernment for you and I and our loved ones. your friend in Christ. -Robert
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Date: 4/6/2010 2:25:00 PM
Awesome, Richard!!! Great imagination about a reality...Truly enjoyed this conversation today...a memorable one.. goes to my favs. today. ...Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 4/6/2010 8:14:00 AM
Powerful and gripping conclusion. Did this really happen, Richard? What a blessing to be able to communicate with God on this level! This one goes to my faves. Great to see you posting again. Love, Carolyn
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