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Dunes of June

Leaving no trace of steps taken by those who dare chase their dreams An unforgiving extreme of frozen Europa and charred, dried streams A meandering maze of an ever-changing, ever-moving landscape A manifestation once entered, none can dare escape Memories carried on a breeze from distant land and seas Sad goodbyes to vibrancies of land once fertile with possibilities A nation born from beaming a light of hope thorough a prism Now harming a tune of gloom like the prophet of doom A sprout in the shade of a stone from a dormant seed A sleeping giant poised to give rise to an ever-green forest Like miracle dewdrops in the midst of a drought Prosper and unite into rivers that flow with might Beware the scorpions buried like landmines in the sand Unstep the old flag and not to step onto quicksand Take stock at the summit lest you go around in circles Remember the 176 back in ’76 and strive for success

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/11/2015 7:38:00 AM
Congrats on your win great write!
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/11/2015 4:22:00 PM
Hi Lee...thank you, I wrote this as a South African youth for South African youth...rgds, Tbang
Date: 7/11/2015 1:55:00 AM
Thbang, Congrats on your Any Old Poem #8 win. Always ~LINDA~
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/11/2015 4:23:00 PM
Hi Linda...really appreciate you congradulating me on one of my personal favorites...rgds, Tbang
Date: 7/10/2015 1:18:00 AM
Thabang, Congratulations, on your awesome win. SKAT
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/10/2015 9:08:00 AM
Hi Skatie...Thank you so much, personally, this is one of my favourite poems...was inspired by South African Youth of '76 cheers, Tbang
Date: 1/7/2015 4:27:00 PM
There are some wonderful lines in this poem, such as "A sprout in the shade of a stone from a dormant seed." That shows a high level of creativity (wish I had thought of it). Nice work, Thabang!
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 1/7/2015 5:54:00 PM
Hi Paul..thank Sir, for your reading with interest and positive feedback, much appreciated...rgds, Thabang

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