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Duncan's Ghost

Evil in your heart Malice in your eyes Dagger in your hands Good old Duncan dies I did for thee Whatever I could I loved you so much Perhaps, I always would Why did you do me in? I was your best I was your beloved I was your kinsman I was your guest.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 11:08:00 AM

Cheers, right back. Luv LINDA

Skat A

Date: 2/4/2016 11:33:00 PM

Naseer,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Naseer Ahmed
Date: 2/5/2016 11:04:00 AM

SKAT A Thank you for welcome. I am Naseer Ahmed,a British Pakistani. Currently, I live in Pakistan and work for human rights. I don't view myself as a poet as I don't know the craft but I think I have wonderful creative possibilities.Therefore I don't worry about craft. .

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/4/2016 7:10:00 PM

Hi Naseer, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Naseer Ahmed
Date: 2/5/2016 11:04:00 AM

Cheers