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Dun Wid Ya

It took me all night and day To become whole again I pray I stay…away from dismay Isn’t it lovely where I’ve been? Who there is done with you? I was always remaining by your side Who there is the sun of rue? I will always moonlight your shine Who there is the gun to my head? Dread is in my head instead… Clouding my mind, this deafness inside This deadness inside is where I hide Done with you Done with you Things I’ve been through Made me this shade of blue Done with you Done with you Things became cruel When I became the fool Done with you Done with you What you do? Laugh at me? What the hell is wrong with you? What the hell is wrong with me? It took me hours on end To cure entirely and endure purely I am on the mend, the mend You took advantage of me sadly Who there is done with you? I was always remaining by your side Who there is the sun of rue? I will always moonlight your shine Who there is the gun to my head? Dread is in my head instead… Clouding my mind, this deafness inside This deadness inside is where I hide Done with you Done with you Things I’ve been through Made me this shade of blue Done with you Done with you Things became cruel When I became the fool Done with you Done with you What you do? Laugh at me? What the hell is wrong with you? What the hell is wrong with me? Don’t tell me how to write Because I read the way I want to Don’t tell me how to dance When you don’t know my moves too Don’t tell me how to spell Because I’m dun wid ya — can’t you tell? Can’t you tell? Can’t you tell? I’m outta my shell I’m outta your spell Who there is done with you? I was always remaining by your side Who there is the sun of rue? I will always moonlight your shine Who there is the gun to my head? Dread is in my head instead… Clouding my mind, this deafness inside This deadness inside is where I hide Done with you Done with you Things I’ve been through Made me this shade of blue Done with you Done with you Things became cruel When I became the fool Done with you Done with you What you do? Laugh at me? What the hell is wrong with you? What the hell is wrong with me? Done with you Done with you What you do? Laugh at me? What the hell is wrong with you? What the hell is wrong with me? I’m done… War’s won… Be gone… I welcome the sun What about you? Are you truly done Being a fool, so cruel? Well, I am… That’s what matters too… I’m a broken damn Even without you…true…

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Date: 8/14/2023 8:31:00 PM
Awe, J. W, hope all is well. Been a while to read yours. This is quite deep and beautiful in its story. And I agree, with Tom too, sounds like a song :)
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Date: 8/12/2023 5:57:00 AM
Reads like a song j dubs. Yeah, let 'er go
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Book: Shattered Sighs