Dull Day

Today I woke up colorblind My wake up call was gray I shuddered at my purgatory It shuddered the same way I got up, found my state of ruin We chatted over tea It dug into my heavy heart, My soul it seeked to glean A shame I woke up colorblind And tomorrow I will too For I miss the loving shades of green Of yellow and of blue

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Silent One

Date: 12/3/2023 3:04:00 AM

Deep and emotive poem, depression described poetically...

Some One
Date: 12/3/2023 9:01:00 AM

Thank you for the comment! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem!

Di11y Da11y

Date: 12/3/2023 12:28:00 AM

I find your poetic voice really interesting. You capture an in-between vantage that's fascinating and different.

Some One
Date: 12/3/2023 1:17:00 AM

Hey! You've made my day with this comment. I would have never thought someone would see my writing enough to identify my poetic voice. I deeply appreciate the support. Thank you!