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Duh-Pause-Oh

Japanese haiku brevity rewards economy
Mental image expressed in a few words
Read. Pause. Then follows clarity.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rolland Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 10:34 PM
so cute to think about that, enjoyed
Gauthier Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 6:37 AM
lol ~ thank you, Yann
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