Duet

Colours shade in contrast- deep blue agapanthus standtall above oloe vera small

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Raul Moreno

Date: 6/14/2009 11:52:00 PM

Beautiful work, love the contrast...Raul

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/14/2009 10:46:00 PM

The colorful ways you express yourself is a beutiful duet of words.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/14/2009 9:43:00 PM

This poem is wonderful, and the aloe vera plant itself with all it's healing powers is quite amazing. Well done! And wanted to say, Brian, after just returning from a trip away this past week, it was such a nice surprise and honor to have my poem place 2nd in your Indelible Impression contest! What a nice homecoming to find out! Thank you so much for choosing mine among such wonderful winners!! It's good to be back on the Soup! Thank you again!! Love, Carrie

P Sheart

Date: 6/14/2009 11:43:00 AM

Hi Brian I too looked up the beautiful flower. A lovely portrait you paint with words here. Many blessings to you and yours hun. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 6/14/2009 7:12:00 AM

This one is good and thanks for your comments and understanding the poem's essence for ur contest.

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/14/2009 6:48:00 AM

Looked up the flower. Gorgeous color. Beautiful imagery. Nature is so inspiring as is proof in your poem. Love, Shar