Duet

Colours
shade in contrast-
deep blue agapanthus
standtall above oloe vera
small

seasonscinquain

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Raul Moreno

June 14, 2009 at 11:52 PM

Beautiful work, love the contrast...Raul

Charlene Bird

June 14, 2009 at 10:46 PM

The colorful ways you express yourself is a beutiful duet of words.

Carrie Richards

June 14, 2009 at 9:43 PM

This poem is wonderful, and the aloe vera plant itself with all it's healing powers is quite amazing. Well done! And wanted to say, Brian, after just returning from a trip away this past week, it was such a nice surprise and honor to have my poem place 2nd in your Indelible Impression contest! What a nice homecoming to find out! Thank you so much for choosing mine among such wonderful winners!! It's good to be back on the Soup! Thank you again!! Love, Carrie

P Sheart

June 14, 2009 at 11:43 AM

Hi Brian I too looked up the beautiful flower. A lovely portrait you paint with words here. Many blessings to you and yours hun. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia