Dualities of Life

august rain showers
diamonds but sun drinks them ~
reflections of life

06.07.2021
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Peckham Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 8:04 PM
Very well put. A delightful haiku that keeps to the original theme of haikus, nature. Perfect last line
Bayles Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 7:14 PM
I like this haiku, lots of meaning.
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 2:44 AM
- Beautiful haiku :) - hugs and congratulations // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 9:34 AM
I always find it so amazing that a raindrop or dewdrop are mirrors of all around them. Look closely at one sometimes and see what you can see. Even look at them with a magnifying glass. Thanks for the visit to my page. Congrats on this winner. Sara
Krutsinger Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 11:28 AM
Ah, so pretty. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 11:20 AM
a sparkling gem, Rama. Congrats for your win.
Alex Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 10:52 AM
I think there is a misunderstanding. I wanted to tell you that you had always been standing second or third in the list of Poets - Top 100 Community and that you have come down. My suggestion to you is to keep it up. Nothing ill meant.
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Bit busy. I appreciate your thoughts, but not easy to take time out for an housewife
Alex Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 10:28 AM
This, indeed, is a beautiful poem. Reflection of life.
Poet Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 9:46 AM
Back with congratulations for a well-deserved win, Rama, All the best
Kauffman Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Rama, what beautiful imagery! This is singularly unique and very creatively crafted. Just delightful! Congratulations on your win!
Kannan Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 7:22 AM
How beautiful!!!
Alex Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 6:35 AM
Reading your poem again. Congratulations!
Alex Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 2:40 AM
Beautiful One. Great imagery. By the way, I am not getting your mail, unfortunately. You can soup mail me if possible. Thanking you.
Cunningham Avatar
August 6, 2021 at 12:29 PM
Lovely image Rama. Tom
Poet Avatar
August 6, 2021 at 10:37 AM
Great Haiku Rama, you captured a nice picture of the rain evaporated in the sky. Are you submitting this to a contest?
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 6, 2021 at 10:42 AM
Yes for Brian Strand contest
Sands Avatar
August 6, 2021 at 8:55 AM
Nice haiku Rama :)
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