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august rain showers diamonds but sun drinks them ~ reflections of life 06.07.2021 Syllable count checked at PS

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Date: 8/13/2021 8:04:00 PM
Very well put. A delightful haiku that keeps to the original theme of haikus, nature. Perfect last line
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Date: 8/9/2021 7:14:00 PM
I like this haiku, lots of meaning.
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Date: 8/9/2021 2:44:00 AM
- Beautiful haiku :) - hugs and congratulations // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/8/2021 9:34:00 AM
I always find it so amazing that a raindrop or dewdrop are mirrors of all around them. Look closely at one sometimes and see what you can see. Even look at them with a magnifying glass. Thanks for the visit to my page. Congrats on this winner. Sara
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Date: 8/7/2021 11:28:00 AM
Ah, so pretty. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/7/2021 11:20:00 AM
a sparkling gem, Rama. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/7/2021 10:52:00 AM
I think there is a misunderstanding. I wanted to tell you that you had always been standing second or third in the list of Poets - Top 100 Community and that you have come down. My suggestion to you is to keep it up. Nothing ill meant.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/7/2021 11:23:00 AM
Bit busy. I appreciate your thoughts, but not easy to take time out for an housewife
Date: 8/7/2021 10:28:00 AM
This, indeed, is a beautiful poem. Reflection of life.
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Date: 8/7/2021 9:46:00 AM
Back with congratulations for a well-deserved win, Rama, All the best
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Date: 8/7/2021 9:01:00 AM
Rama, what beautiful imagery! This is singularly unique and very creatively crafted. Just delightful! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/7/2021 7:22:00 AM
How beautiful!!!
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Date: 8/7/2021 6:35:00 AM
Reading your poem again. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/7/2021 2:40:00 AM
Beautiful One. Great imagery. By the way, I am not getting your mail, unfortunately. You can soup mail me if possible. Thanking you.
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Date: 8/6/2021 12:29:00 PM
Lovely image Rama. Tom
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Date: 8/6/2021 10:37:00 AM
Great Haiku Rama, you captured a nice picture of the rain evaporated in the sky. Are you submitting this to a contest?
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/6/2021 10:42:00 AM
Yes for Brian Strand contest
Date: 8/6/2021 8:55:00 AM
Nice haiku Rama :)
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