Drying of the Years

Little fears of boys
           Transmittlal years of rejoice
Brittle tears of joys
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 7:59 AM
oh, boys can be warmly vulnerable too, robb... superb piece of a tanka.. best winning wishes if for a contest...:) huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 11:50 PM
Great title to go with those brittle tears, Robb.
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