Drunks

Drunks

Stay in Funks

No longer look like Hunks

Use Sidewalks for Bunks

Get beaten up by Punks 

And though they have Lost it All

They'll be in the Bodega Tomorrow

Looking for some Alcohol
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Smith Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 7:19 PM
Nice write and very true!
O'Haolin Whalen Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 8:36 PM
Donald, I just read the first 5 or 6 of the poems on your blog and got the impression of seeing you in a coffeehouse on open mike poetry night reading these poems aloud. You'd fit perfectly, and would no doubt be extremely popular. (you might want to lose many of the commas in your writing though as they're unnecessary!)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace