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DRUNKEN MOON

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DRUNKEN MOON

~twice the beauty~


in the sea of love 
reflection of the night 
a wave moves


~SKAT~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 12/22/2016 9:54:00 AM
Oh, this is absolutely gorgeous!
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Date: 10/16/2016 7:31:00 PM
I wonder how many times I have visited this rockin' and rollin' haiku! Anyway, just came to say hello!!
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Date: 8/4/2016 10:56:00 AM
I love this poem. The moon is such an icon for love and when one sees it reflected in the "sea of love" it is moving, and we can only hold tight as the wave hits us. Thank you for sharing this. Well done.
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Date: 7/27/2016 3:10:00 AM
If you're in love, you're always drunken..
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Date: 7/20/2016 10:19:00 AM
Hello my dearest sis and friend, Skat! Just missing you and your stellar writes. Loving and enjoying this very beautiful haiku as always! Thanks a lot for sharing! Sending you love, hugs and smiles! Have a great week to you and your family! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 6/23/2016 11:07:00 AM
This is really marvellous Skat! I simply admire your skills in writing such a beautiful Haiku... A7 AND A fav:)~hugs ~red
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Date: 6/15/2016 3:42:00 PM
Re-remembering this awesome challenge from last year at this time!
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Date: 4/29/2016 10:47:00 PM
Nice!
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Date: 2/2/2016 3:38:00 PM
remembering this contest that was so awesome last year!! Hi, Skat.
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Date: 1/26/2016 1:17:00 PM
Oh I like this! Nice write!
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Date: 1/10/2016 12:52:00 PM
Excellent pen Skat! Very nice Haiku!A7!I'm really hoping that you still around and that in the end you stay with us in the soup.I wish you Very Happy n' Prosperous New Year in 2016!:))Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you!:)D.
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Date: 1/4/2016 12:22:00 AM
I shall look in on your other poetry my friend, i just needed my little Haiku fix once again. Once again an excellent piece. Diamonds can indeed be found in little packages. After reading this one, i think i can try for some sleep soon and let the waters take me away. A seven and a fav....Vladislav.
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Date: 1/2/2016 7:25:00 PM
Skat, I am glad to see your poems are still here!! maybe you can be inspired to write one this weekend??
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Date: 12/31/2015 2:01:00 AM
Hello my dearest sis and friend, Skat! I'm stopping by to read again this beautiful haiku and to thank you as well for your warm congratulatory comments on my poems. May I also have this chance to greet you and your loved ones a Very Happy and Prosperous New Year 2016! May this year be the greatest, most wonderful, joyful and most blessed year to you and your family! Hugs and kisses!<3forever, Leonora
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Date: 12/30/2015 3:36:00 PM
Very cute! Thank you. It's a nice feeling to read tour poems.
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Date: 12/27/2015 7:18:00 PM
Beautiful! I read it again and again! :)
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Date: 12/27/2015 4:20:00 PM
I love writing haikus. I can see you do too. This one is perfect. I keep forgetting to rate your poetry. All 7 ratings, of course. :-) Skat, this haiku is gorgeous.
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Date: 12/17/2015 3:47:00 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
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Date: 12/11/2015 9:12:00 AM
Absolutely lovely. :)
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Date: 12/8/2015 12:19:00 PM
Love the loving theme amidst this little Gem ~~ James ~~
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Date: 12/3/2015 4:23:00 AM
lovely
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Date: 11/24/2015 8:47:00 PM
There's something really great about this haiku. The moon is pulling at the wave, the way love can drag emotions. This is a great poem.
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Date: 11/5/2015 10:15:00 PM
As I look at the "reflection of the night" see many images, time fades and I am almost gone -- then the wave washes it all away!
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Date: 11/5/2015 10:15:00 PM
As I look at the "reflection of the night" see many images, time fades and I am almost gone -- then the wave washes it all away!
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Date: 10/29/2015 4:18:00 PM
Hmmm! In Physics this is called Entaglement..."a spooky action from a distance"-Einstein. That the waves so far away are entwined and timed by the moon is just incredible. Gravity! Love this tribute to both moon & wave! (Literal). Also, love the more subtle implications that this can stand in as metaphor. Great thought here!
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