Drunken Moon

~twice the beauty~


in the sea of love 
reflection of the night 
a wave moves


~SKAT~

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Justin Clason

Date: 1/7/2022 9:21:00 AM

This haiku is perfect. I really admire your talent. Great job!

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/29/2021 3:03:00 PM

I appreciate the flow here, there has also such an Open quality to explore'

Brian Cooper

Date: 6/19/2019 7:08:00 PM

Skat, love the topic! As a seafarer and lover of the moon light I appreciate the flow of this poem. Brian

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/27/2019 7:05:00 AM

Very well written!

Woodrow Lucas

Date: 12/12/2017 10:53:00 PM

Skat, This poem reminds me of Langston Hughes. You say so much in such a few lines. And the ambiguous nature of the word, wave in this piece is classic!!! Great Write!!! Woody

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/4/2017 10:17:00 PM

Gorgeous imagery SKAT and a lovely theme. Enjoyed!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/9/2017 9:21:00 PM

Love a haiku :)

Tamal Kundu

Date: 12/22/2016 9:54:00 AM

Oh, this is absolutely gorgeous!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2016 7:31:00 PM

I wonder how many times I have visited this rockin' and rollin' haiku! Anyway, just came to say hello!!

Hillard Sarver

Date: 8/4/2016 10:56:00 AM

I love this poem. The moon is such an icon for love and when one sees it reflected in the "sea of love" it is moving, and we can only hold tight as the wave hits us. Thank you for sharing this. Well done.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/27/2016 3:10:00 AM

If you're in love, you're always drunken..

Len Gasun

Date: 7/20/2016 10:19:00 AM

Hello my dearest sis and friend, Skat! Just missing you and your stellar writes. Loving and enjoying this very beautiful haiku as always! Thanks a lot for sharing! Sending you love, hugs and smiles! Have a great week to you and your family! love lots, Leonora

Red Fiery

Date: 6/23/2016 11:07:00 AM

This is really marvellous Skat! I simply admire your skills in writing such a beautiful Haiku... A7 AND A fav:)~hugs ~red

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2016 3:42:00 PM

Re-remembering this awesome challenge from last year at this time!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/29/2016 10:47:00 PM

Nice!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2016 3:38:00 PM

remembering this contest that was so awesome last year!! Hi, Skat.

Ingrid Showalter Swift

Date: 1/26/2016 1:17:00 PM

Oh I like this! Nice write!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/10/2016 12:52:00 PM

Excellent pen Skat! Very nice Haiku!A7!I'm really hoping that you still around and that in the end you stay with us in the soup.I wish you Very Happy n' Prosperous New Year in 2016!:))Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you!:)D.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/4/2016 12:22:00 AM

I shall look in on your other poetry my friend, i just needed my little Haiku fix once again. Once again an excellent piece. Diamonds can indeed be found in little packages. After reading this one, i think i can try for some sleep soon and let the waters take me away. A seven and a fav....Vladislav.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2016 7:25:00 PM

Skat, I am glad to see your poems are still here!! maybe you can be inspired to write one this weekend??

Len Gasun

Date: 12/31/2015 2:01:00 AM

Hello my dearest sis and friend, Skat! I'm stopping by to read again this beautiful haiku and to thank you as well for your warm congratulatory comments on my poems. May I also have this chance to greet you and your loved ones a Very Happy and Prosperous New Year 2016! May this year be the greatest, most wonderful, joyful and most blessed year to you and your family! Hugs and kisses!<3forever, Leonora

Gholamreza Zarban

Date: 12/30/2015 3:36:00 PM

Very cute! Thank you. It's a nice feeling to read tour poems.

Robyn Campbell

Date: 12/27/2015 4:20:00 PM

I love writing haikus. I can see you do too. This one is perfect. I keep forgetting to rate your poetry. All 7 ratings, of course. :-) Skat, this haiku is gorgeous.

Funom Makama

Date: 12/17/2015 3:47:00 AM

lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!