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Drunken By the Moon 

Drinking all your beauty
Crazed under your influence
Intoxicating moonshine






*Not for the contest, just inspired by it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015
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MD Johnson
Date: 2/13/2023 6:40:00 AM
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Another one thoroughly enjoyed. I'll definitely be reading more of your poems. -MDJ
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Red Barchettadrive
Date: 11/9/2015 12:52:00 AM
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Loving me some lunar poetics! This is awesome Kelly!
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Red Barchettadrive
Date: 11/20/2015 11:09:00 PM
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I believe the last 10 or so of my poems are astrologically inspired. I must be a moon-a-tic!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/20/2015 11:04:00 PM
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Thank you very much for your kind comments... So many of us use the moon for inspiration and I am so glad that we do. I love reading lunar poems, too :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/28/2015 1:52:00 PM
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Your words are soft and mysterious, full of life and magic. Emile
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/3/2015 9:41:00 PM
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Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly, Emile!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/17/2015 9:50:00 PM
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oh my GOSH, how did I never see this beauty. I really love it!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/23/2015 1:41:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea. I'm happy that you liked this one. It was a fun poem to write :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/6/2015 5:09:00 AM
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A really wonderful haiku Kelly. I loved it!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/9/2015 10:01:00 PM
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I'm so glad you did, Connie! Thank you very much for your nice comments :)
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Paul Callus
Date: 7/5/2015 4:06:00 AM
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Very clever and creative, Kelly. A different kind of tipsiness! #7 hugs // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/7/2015 11:44:00 PM
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Yes, the moonlight can easily make me swoon!... I appreciate your nice comments and the 7 rating, Paul. Thank you!... Hugs :)
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Daver Austin
Date: 7/4/2015 1:08:00 PM
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Good one. The man in the moon is staggering. Love, daver
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/7/2015 11:17:00 PM
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Yes, he is!... Thank you for the nice comments, Daver. I appreciate it :)
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 7/4/2015 6:48:00 AM
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well sketched, kelly.. i like every line here.. huggs!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/7/2015 10:53:00 PM
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Thank you, Nette. I had fun writing this one!... Hugs :)
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Skat A
Date: 7/3/2015 7:05:00 PM
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Nice oe Kelly. Have a safe and Happy 4th of July.... ... Love SKAT
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Date: 7/3/2015 5:56:00 PM
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Love that this was inspired by the contest.. :)@-> LINDA <-@
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/3/2015 3:17:00 PM
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- Beautiful haiku, Kelly! (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/5/2015 10:32:00 PM
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I haven't written many haikus, so I wanted to give it a try... Thank you for the kind comments and 7 rating, Anne-Lise. Hugs :)
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