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Drunken By the Moon

Drinking all your beauty
Crazed under your influence
Intoxicating moonshine






*Not for the contest, just inspired by it.

Copyright © Kelly Deschler | Year Posted 2015

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February 13, 2023 at 6:40 AM

Another one thoroughly enjoyed. I'll definitely be reading more of your poems. -MDJ

Red Barchettadrive

November 9, 2015 at 12:52 AM

Loving me some lunar poetics! This is awesome Kelly!

Red Barchettadrive

November 20, 2015 at 11:09 PM

I believe the last 10 or so of my poems are astrologically inspired. I must be a moon-a-tic!

November 20, 2015 at 11:04 PM

Thank you very much for your kind comments... So many of us use the moon for inspiration and I am so glad that we do. I love reading lunar poems, too :)

July 28, 2015 at 1:52 PM

Your words are soft and mysterious, full of life and magic. Emile

August 3, 2015 at 9:41 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly, Emile!

Andrea Dietrich

July 17, 2015 at 9:50 PM

oh my GOSH, how did I never see this beauty. I really love it!

July 23, 2015 at 1:41 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I'm happy that you liked this one. It was a fun poem to write :)

Connie Marcum Wong

July 6, 2015 at 5:09 AM

A really wonderful haiku Kelly. I loved it!

July 9, 2015 at 10:01 PM

I'm so glad you did, Connie! Thank you very much for your nice comments :)

July 5, 2015 at 4:06 AM

Very clever and creative, Kelly. A different kind of tipsiness! #7 hugs // paul

July 7, 2015 at 11:44 PM

Yes, the moonlight can easily make me swoon!... I appreciate your nice comments and the 7 rating, Paul. Thank you!... Hugs :)

July 4, 2015 at 1:08 PM

Good one. The man in the moon is staggering. Love, daver

July 7, 2015 at 11:17 PM

Yes, he is!... Thank you for the nice comments, Daver. I appreciate it :)

July 4, 2015 at 6:48 AM

well sketched, kelly.. i like every line here.. huggs!

July 7, 2015 at 10:53 PM

Thank you, Nette. I had fun writing this one!... Hugs :)

July 3, 2015 at 7:05 PM

Nice oe Kelly. Have a safe and Happy 4th of July.... ... Love SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

July 3, 2015 at 5:56 PM

Love that this was inspired by the contest.. :)@-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 3, 2015 at 3:17 PM

- Beautiful haiku, Kelly! (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

July 5, 2015 at 10:32 PM

I haven't written many haikus, so I wanted to give it a try... Thank you for the kind comments and 7 rating, Anne-Lise. Hugs :)

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