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unrhymed couples 

Drunken Aroma of Heaven Blooms

You strike the deepest cord noted guest 
warmly through heart pulsing words sigh 

White is the lily from four chambers glowing gold 
inwardly music echoes distant bells strike home 

Murmurs dance fluttering upon dove wings whisper  
to the soul captivating music upon oceans rises and falls 

Kneeling only before your beauty captivating light 
crowned divinely colours through the mist 

Sweet salvation sings to the Spirit breathless 
one miracle caught within a moment of sunshine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Hello Ilam, your poem is beautifully written . You paint a beautiful picture with your words. Have a nice day my friend.
Shines Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 11:26 AM
very beautiful poem!Have a great day
Bateman Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! I must say my Irish comrade that methinks you've hit the mark quite well with this one!! "Drunken Aroma" indeed . . . with a spirit breathless, eh? Any association with Heaven in this instance is spot-on. Most Excellent!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 2:31 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Pandit Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Excellent poetry liam..beautifully rendered.
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 1:51 PM
- A beautiful heavenly poem, Liam :) - Hope all is well at your home :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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