Drunken Aroma of Heaven Blooms

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You strike the deepest cord noted guest warmly through heart pulsing words sigh White is the lily from four chambers glowing gold inwardly music echoes distant bells strike home Murmurs dance fluttering upon dove wings whisper to the soul captivating music upon oceans rises and falls Kneeling only before your beauty captivating light crowned divinely colours through the mist Sweet salvation sings to the Spirit breathless one miracle caught within a moment of sunshine

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/6/2018 1:55:00 PM

Hello Ilam, your poem is beautifully written . You paint a beautiful picture with your words. Have a nice day my friend.

Kenisha Shines

Date: 12/2/2018 11:26:00 AM

very beautiful poem!Have a great day

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/15/2018 1:20:00 PM

Hello Liam Mate!! I must say my Irish comrade that methinks you've hit the mark quite well with this one!! "Drunken Aroma" indeed . . . with a spirit breathless, eh? Any association with Heaven in this instance is spot-on. Most Excellent!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/13/2018 2:31:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/13/2018 1:53:00 PM

Excellent poetry liam..beautifully rendered.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2018 1:51:00 PM

- A beautiful heavenly poem, Liam :) - Hope all is well at your home :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)