Drunk and Lost At Sea

Pulled by Whiskey tides,
Ebbs and flows a fluid mind;
Perished on the rocks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 10:33 PM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 7:05 PM
lovely haiku. love the title.... Have a safe and Happy 4th of July.... ... Love SKAT
Keane Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 5:45 AM
Thank you SKAT. I really like the Haiku format.
A   Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 5:56 PM
wonderful haiku William, if this is for the drunken moon contest. you might want to view the rules. :)@-> LINDA <-@
Keane Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 5:54 AM
Thank you, I'm a newbie to all this so I haven't entered any contests yet. :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 2:07 PM
An interesting one (for the contest?)
Keane Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 5:53 AM
Hi Andrea, I'm new to poetry and poetry soup so I haven't considered any contests just yet.
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