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Drunk and Lost At Sea

Pulled by Whiskey tides, Ebbs and flows a fluid mind; Perished on the rocks.

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Date: 7/3/2015 7:05:00 PM

lovely haiku. love the title.... Have a safe and Happy 4th of July.... ... Love SKAT

William Keane
Date: 7/9/2015 5:45:00 AM

Thank you SKAT. I really like the Haiku format.

Date: 7/3/2015 5:56:00 PM

wonderful haiku William, if this is for the drunken moon contest. you might want to view the rules. :)@-> LINDA <-@

William Keane
Date: 7/9/2015 5:54:00 AM

Thank you, I'm a newbie to all this so I haven't entered any contests yet. :)

Date: 7/3/2015 2:07:00 PM

An interesting one (for the contest?)

William Keane
Date: 7/9/2015 5:53:00 AM

Hi Andrea, I'm new to poetry and poetry soup so I haven't considered any contests just yet.