Drunk

a drink to my lips a cigarete i inhale i say f%$k this sh%t

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2016 9:56:00 AM

ha, I like the haiku Marvin... LINDA

Marvin Anderson
Date: 10/29/2016 4:48:00 AM

Thank you

Skat A

Date: 7/21/2015 4:12:00 PM

MARVIN, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"

Marvin Anderson
Date: 10/29/2016 4:51:00 AM

Thank you

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/25/2010 5:28:00 AM

Nice haiku well penned with nice images, marvin

Marvin Anderson
Date: 10/29/2016 4:52:00 AM

Thank you

Marco Alamilla

Date: 9/24/2010 11:14:00 PM

man i feel you on that

Diane Christian

Date: 9/24/2010 10:31:00 PM

awww a sad poem for many this is true I thank the Lord that I dont have to turn to such things, he is my rock who keeps me strong. God bless you from diane