I had too much Pastis tonight
Have you ever been drunk, and submersed in a funk, as if trapped in a trunk but then asked to write junk in a poem which stunk though your mind has been shrunk by a psychotic monk who’s been beaten punch-drunk and if not a slam dunk as a poet you’ll flunk?
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