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I had too much Pastis tonight

Have you ever been drunk, and submersed in a funk, as if trapped in a trunk but then asked to write junk in a poem which stunk though your mind has been shrunk by a psychotic monk who’s been beaten punch-drunk and if not a slam dunk as a poet you’ll flunk?

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Date: 11/21/2024 9:15:00 AM
I've been this drunk.
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 12/6/2024 9:19:00 AM
Thanks John ... Great, isn't it!!!
Date: 11/15/2024 1:17:00 AM
I laughed I did, the rest I will not confess.
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 12/6/2024 9:17:00 AM
I'm happy you laughed, Arthur... the rest I will leave to my imagination ;-)

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