Drunk

Cider
Slider

Whiskey
Frisky

Pink gin
Head spin

Beer cheer
Eyes blear

Fine wine
Supine

Big head
Feel dead

Rethink
The drink

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Gershon Wolf

September 4, 2019 at 10:08 PM

Love that 'punch line' there at the end. Sage advice! :) gw

Elizabeth Kinch

September 5, 2019 at 2:38 AM

Thank you Gershon. I really don't enjoy witnessing drunks.

Panagiota Romios

September 3, 2019 at 8:41 AM

Outstanding Footies, Elizabeth Best one was.,, Rethink The Drink.

Elizabeth Kinch

September 3, 2019 at 9:26 AM

Thank you Panagiota

Sandra Adams

August 30, 2019 at 10:34 AM

i think we all rethink the drink amidst the pain of hangovers, but does one ever recall them the next time a drink allures? Good one, enjoyed the read :) hugs

Elizabeth Kinch

August 30, 2019 at 10:46 AM

Thank you Sandy. I've had a couple of bad hangovers that put me off for life. I'm happy to stick with water now : )