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Men gather forms a circle the tribe gathers about the drums are placed the flames of the fire pit centers the circle shoots high into the night wood burst fire sparkles now all is ready as the drums beat onward as the tribe answers with subtle moves to the beat of the drummin' individually some turns some dance up and down in the same spot not movin' beyond but stationery all are chanting dancing turning and beating the drums drummin' unceasingly, with the women stamping their feet to the beat of the drums and little boys learning the beat of the drums and little girls learn the stamping dancing turning and both boys and girls all chanting to the beat of the drums drummin' into the night with the fire roaring high above its central core amidst the constant beat of the drums drummin' what is the tribes tradition. Date: 06/21/2019

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Date: 6/21/2019 1:29:00 PM
Love the format, the drumbeat, the way this poem moves. A winner, William! Aloha, gw
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Date: 6/21/2019 1:40:00 PM
Whoa, I need to catch up - again and the woes w/PS--no help Ugh! ~ William

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