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Drugs Caused a Wedge

my womb, your first home our bond formed before your first cry~ but drugs made us foes 01/03/2020 Contest: Senryu on Mother Sponsor: Jenish Somadas

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/6/2020 9:10:00 AM

How sad that the baby can't make a choice in the womb and kick her ever so hard so that she will never touch a drug again! Love and best wishes, Jenny.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/5/2020 12:15:00 PM

Ooh! Spot on, Alexis. Superb senryu highlighting the cruelty and the pathetic addictions of mothers who would pass this poison on to their babes. Thanks, Gershon

Jan Allison

Date: 1/3/2020 2:59:00 PM

painful to read Alexis , sadly am hearing more and more of addiction driving wedges between parent and child to the extent of someone we know their daughter has adopted 2 boys whose mother can;t look after them as she is an addict:-( the younger boy has issues as a result of being poisoned in the womb:-(

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/3/2020 2:47:00 PM

Heartbreaking write my friend-all the best.

Chris Green

Date: 1/3/2020 2:21:00 PM

Very sad and heart breaking my friend.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 1/3/2020 1:42:00 PM

This one hurts to read. Potent poem! Hugs, xomo