Drowsy Fly - Fulton -

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October 4, 2008 at 10:53 AM
Nice use of alliteration. The title enhances the poem. Interesting use of this challenging form. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing. Karen
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October 4, 2008 at 9:05 AM
I like the metaphors in this write, it made me smile, take care D-nyce
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October 3, 2008 at 12:30 PM
Love this! Very creative use of this form. Well done! Love, Shar
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October 3, 2008 at 6:41 AM
Teresita - This is a wonderful use of this form - made me smile - God Bless
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