Harry Horsman Poet Rhyme

Drowning In Her Tears

(From a Mermaids lament saga)

Oh lady of the deep doth cry
floats in tears of her love
for him;
for her true love just drifts on by
needs the air from above
can’t swim.

© Harry J Horsman 2015

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Robert Lindley July 22, 2015 at 5:30 PM Insightful writing my friend. He should invest in scuba gear and enjoy the mermaids company! Solid 7 on this one too.

Scott Thirtyseven June 24, 2015 at 2:04 PM LOL. Oh the anguish.

Monterey Sirak June 10, 2015 at 5:57 AM Stunning! Your words sing hauntingly of the sadness of an unattainable love. Thank you for reading and wonderful comments on my poems.

Cecilia Macfarlane June 4, 2015 at 7:18 PM Heartfelt and with so much truth. Terrific write! Hugs

Kelly Deschler June 4, 2015 at 1:43 PM Our actions and emotions can suffocate those we love and we end up losing them... A great use of metaphors in this deep write. Very nicely penned, Harry!

Funom Makama June 4, 2015 at 10:21 AM What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

Bl Devnath June 3, 2015 at 12:21 PM She is helpless because of her true love and wants relief. Very sad picture but you have adorned with very illuminating golden colors, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 2, 2015 at 2:22 PM love this xx

Arthur Vaso June 1, 2015 at 7:15 PM Hi Harry, lovely!

Jan Allison June 1, 2015 at 7:12 AM oh Harry the imagery is so beautiful but sad:-) Hugs jan xx