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Drowning

Would you hear me, If I screamed in your ear? Come inside my mind tonight, Will you love me in the morning? I''m falling into an abyss. Catch me if you can, and Give me one last kiss. I've already said good-bye, Did you hear me? I feel like I can fly. I feel so free. If you wait around forever, I'll surely bring you down. A promise of forever, When you start to drown. I've started descending. Too far deep, There's no defending. I'll be your angel, I'll watch over you dear. I started drowning, Without a warning. *Written on May 15, 2013

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Date: 9/27/2013 10:54:00 PM
very beautiful
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Date: 6/7/2013 9:37:00 AM
Simply beautiful poem. - Edward
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Date: 5/16/2013 2:29:00 PM
If one can feel like they can fly, yet starts to drown, they need stronger wings aka self confidence. This was quite the powerful writing, Lily. Well done!
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