Justin Robbins Poet I do not know?

Drowning

Unthinkable reality coming to life,
Terms of conditions in overwhelming strife.
A strangled cry of pain and grief,
No one knows because they don’t believe.
Crawling on both knees, to weak to walk,
While evil laughs and continues to stalk.
My mind my heart all have drained,
A blackened tar leaves them stained.
Alone and forsaken, my self-made hell,
I drown so slowly in life's well.

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Sushreeta Sundara March 11, 2011 at 8:01 PM I am a fan of yours Justin........you must be a wonderful person with such wonderful thoughts.....it just feels like a joke, to admire what you have written , though i feel like you are in such a deep pain, but i still have to admire you.....Life is very diplomatic.....but plz, overcome your pain!

Jslambert Mister Roboto March 11, 2011 at 5:55 PM Dude. I Feel like I wrote this! I mean that in a good way. Man. Your head must be as messed up as mine. REEEAL GOOOOD! Much Props! ~JS