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Drowning

Exhausted with stress Feeling the burdening weight The sudden longing to decompress Realizing his tired state Unable to continue Acknowledging the weakness He struggled and knew Sinking into the darkness Gasping for air Reaching for help Letting his last breath be a prayer No longer would he yelp The waters consumed him Others did their best But he couldn’t swim Now his body will rest

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Date: 1/31/2022 10:53:00 AM
Too bad he did not realise air fills his lungs and all he had to do was turn around to float to the top . . . .
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