Drowning

" Drowning "

Drowning in my teardrops
sinking in them deep
feeling so inadequate
no longer can I sleep.

So many precious moments
lost now since that day
our happiness and our future
gone when you went away.

My broken heart is shattered
impossible to rebuild
the wounds are cut too deeply
emptiness is what I yield.

Sad eyes forever burning
with these tears I shed
the ache is really killing me
my spirit is now dead.

Drowning in these teardrops
morning as I fall
I'm hopelessly awaiting
to see if you will call.

My telephone is silent
the mail never comes
my life is fading quickly
what am I to become?

My love, I really miss you
I pray that you'll return
my heart will always love you
I'll never let that burn.

The door is always open
to the love that we once shared
please don't throw it all away
I know you really cared.

Drowning in my teardrops
I'll sit here and I'll pray
that one day you'll come back to me
to build a brand new day.

You've hurt me like no other
the only love I knew
all of this pain is worth it
to spend my life with you...

Penned By MPK

Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion...

Quote: The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Can’t Be Seen Or Touched
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 3/9/2009 8:48:00 AM
Aw, how sweet and sad. I love the fact that all your poems are different, some to make us smile, some to make us cry, some to make us proud. I'm just proud to know someone like you, you make the world shine a little brighter, thank you for that....Love ya, Aleera
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Date: 11/5/2008 5:57:00 PM
isn't it ironic that it seems the best poetry is always penned when the artist is down and blue? I guess that is why I can't write a humorous poem if I tried. Great pen but remember mickey, you are never alone you have a friend here!
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Date: 11/4/2008 10:59:00 AM
Aww, this is just too heartbreaking. So sorry for all your pain and sadness. Wishing you lighter, brighter days and new love, or the one you write of, to ease your sorrow. Good luck. Love, Shar
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