Drown the Pain

I turn to the bottle cause it never 
lets me down..
Take a deep breath as the pain 
slowly drowns..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Britt Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 11:50 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Dyna! That's a very pretty name. Love definitely does this. Keep writing and showing who you are through your poetry. I recommend checking out the "Contests: by Members" link they can be both challenging and fun! <3
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June 19, 2012 at 10:53 AM
Peace and much love for you...May you be blessed!
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 10:34 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Dyna. - This is a lovely and sweet written poem, like it a lot. You write so well. - Hope you will have fun with poetry, write, read and comments.... - Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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June 19, 2012 at 10:07 AM
Very touching, glad you found someone to make you smile : ) love Elizabeth
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June 19, 2012 at 10:06 AM
This is so romantic all the way..beautifully written!! Hope you shared this with your loved one!!
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