Drops of Evil

Drops of Evil

Evils dripping melting from the sky
You cant stop cyring, you don’t know why
Demons surround you , flying in the night
Good keeps trying , but there is no fight

Give me a shovel to dig your grave
I feel like a monster entering a rage
Cant you stop me from unlocking the cage
Six feet deep, you’ll spend the rest of your days

Black summers make the fall come soon
With evil barking at the moon
Redemption calls as you look at your life
Smiling now as you use the knife

As the sky melt, the sun gets larger
Earth turns to fire, and hell is no farther
The chosen leave as you burn to ash
Nothing else matters, eternity has passed

Black summers make the fall come soon
With evil barking at the moon
Redemption calls as you look at your life
Smiling now as you use the knife

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/24/2015 5:50:00 PM
Hi, William, WOW to the imagery. Describing the drops of evil, like the essence in mist. I read over 50 poems today. And this is my fav. ha, it has nothing to do with evil, just the way you use the form cutting all ends. Love it. A 7 and a Fav. I probably enjoyed 5 other outstanding poems. But, this is the only one I will fav this month. :) Love SKAT
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William Curlee
Date: 12/5/2015 5:18:00 PM
WOW!!Never thought I would hear your comment about this poem. My whole life, I've been criticized and told not to write about evil and darkness, but finally someone gets it. You are the first. Thanks a lot.
Date: 11/22/2015 8:04:00 PM
Dark but entertaining.
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