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Drops of Evil

Drops of Evil Evils dripping melting from the sky You cant stop cyring, you don’t know why Demons surround you , flying in the night Good keeps trying , but there is no fight Give me a shovel to dig your grave I feel like a monster entering a rage Cant you stop me from unlocking the cage Six feet deep, you’ll spend the rest of your days Black summers make the fall come soon With evil barking at the moon Redemption calls as you look at your life Smiling now as you use the knife As the sky melt, the sun gets larger Earth turns to fire, and hell is no farther The chosen leave as you burn to ash Nothing else matters, eternity has passed Black summers make the fall come soon With evil barking at the moon Redemption calls as you look at your life Smiling now as you use the knife

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/24/2015 5:50:00 PM
Hi, William, WOW to the imagery. Describing the drops of evil, like the essence in mist. I read over 50 poems today. And this is my fav. ha, it has nothing to do with evil, just the way you use the form cutting all ends. Love it. A 7 and a Fav. I probably enjoyed 5 other outstanding poems. But, this is the only one I will fav this month. :) Love SKAT
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William Curlee
Date: 12/5/2015 5:18:00 PM
WOW!!Never thought I would hear your comment about this poem. My whole life, I've been criticized and told not to write about evil and darkness, but finally someone gets it. You are the first. Thanks a lot.
Date: 11/22/2015 8:04:00 PM
Dark but entertaining.
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