Drops of Blood

Crimson rivulets, felled from a need for pain.
They forget to scream, and instead a sigh reigns.
The blade that strokes.
Each murderous thought it provokes.
An attempt to escape paled and failed.
The stains embalmed.
The blade now palmed, for the wrist it may dash.
If it may, more blood doth it dash
An idea that pain is relief, how rash.
This hurt so much, could they not ever remember to move on?
Yet to this they fall pawn.
Somehow to it they feel drawn.
Their thighs and wrists well clawn.
Now they are gone.
Out of the silence, a single sound is born.
The echoing drip of the dropping drops of stained blood.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/9/2025 2:39:00 PM
"Crimson rivulets, felled from a need for pain." What a hurting experience
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Date: 8/28/2014 6:35:00 PM
What a deep sad write this is! Well penned! I wish you a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings. Pandita
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Date: 8/27/2014 7:55:00 AM
such a deep dark write on suicide amkes me so so sad when someone takes their own life and the pain must be unbearable for those left behind:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/26/2014 7:33:00 PM
wow this was very well written. unfortunately i am suicidal and i feel theirs nothing to change my mind. im glad you wrote about this. you understand the pain that a suicidal goes through... this was a really strong poem good job
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Date: 8/27/2014 8:57:00 AM
I've thankfully been a friend to a person who is suicidal, and over time she's slowly begun to get better. Some of my poems are at times what would have happened to her: I hope to soon get some out that are about her getting better. And thank you, I hope that others also think it was a job well done. c:
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