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Drizzle

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raindrops
                   pitter patter
                                click clack first light then fast
                                                mist rises from drives and roadways
drizzle
  

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2012

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/7/2012 8:55:00 PM Love the different sounds in this one. Great ending line. Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 8/7/2012 8:46:00 PM Nice picture painted by your use of this form. Very visual and striking! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 8/7/2012 3:32:00 AM such a simple aspect of the morning, yet put in to your poem, it is wonderland. Sara, you asked me about Moor, i'll try be brief, it is highland above the valleys, usually named, like Rombald's Moor, which is our Moor here, in Wharfedale where i live, In fact when i started to read some of your poems, i thought you were a local lass from here in Yorkshire. love what you do, love Harry Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 8/6/2012 9:29:00 AM love this imaginative and clever write, Sara Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/6/2012 1:30:00 AM good tonality and poetic impact, sara... well done!..:) huggs Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 8/5/2012 10:24:00 PM Lovely ....just lovely Cinquin here Sara! Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 8/5/2012 7:16:00 PM Wonderful images Sara. Such a great piece of poetry. Hugs n luv Michael Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 8/5/2012 7:15:00 PM This is a fabulous Cinquain my friend! I love a good drizzle in the morning, right about the time the sun rises! Such beauty in your awesome words here Sara! Great Work!! Login to Reply

Joann Grisetti Date: 8/5/2012 7:14:00 PM I can picture this mist from the roads, especially on hot afternoons. great description. Login to Reply