Drizzle

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raindrops
                   pitter patter
                                click clack first light then fast
                                                mist rises from drives and roadways
drizzle

naturecinquain

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Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2012 at 8:55 PM

Love the different sounds in this one. Great ending line.

Matthew Anish

August 7, 2012 at 8:46 PM

Nice picture painted by your use of this form. Very visual and striking! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Harry Horsman

August 7, 2012 at 3:32 AM

such a simple aspect of the morning, yet put in to your poem, it is wonderland. Sara, you asked me about Moor, i'll try be brief, it is highland above the valleys, usually named, like Rombald's Moor, which is our Moor here, in Wharfedale where i live, In fact when i started to read some of your poems, i thought you were a local lass from here in Yorkshire. love what you do, love Harry

Jack Horne

August 6, 2012 at 9:29 AM

love this imaginative and clever write, Sara

Nette Onclaud

August 6, 2012 at 1:30 AM

good tonality and poetic impact, sara... well done!..:) huggs

Kash Poet

August 5, 2012 at 10:24 PM

Lovely ....just lovely Cinquin here Sara!

Michael J. Falotico

August 5, 2012 at 7:16 PM

Wonderful images Sara. Such a great piece of poetry. Hugs n luv Michael

Russell Sivey

August 5, 2012 at 7:15 PM

This is a fabulous Cinquain my friend! I love a good drizzle in the morning, right about the time the sun rises! Such beauty in your awesome words here Sara! Great Work!!