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Drizzle

Drizzle down the crops
                          ~usually dry in Spain~
    raindrops are worshiped 

              rain is expected
                  ~for a future oasis~
    in a new dessert
                
                              without any trees
   ~not a refuge from the sun~
                     no rain from the sky
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Greenhough Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 12:39 PM
This poem paints an interesting picture Reading it caused me to feel the rain drizzling on a beautiful world.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 2:21 PM
Hello Hilda. Thank you for passing by and your nice comment. Blessings
Greenhough Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 12:40 PM
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