Driving Whim

Oh, how I wish to
drive 
Hold the steering
wheel ,feeling alive
I have been ridden
for so long 
I wanna ride,wanna
feel strong
Open up the door and
hop in 
Is it a crime ,is it
a sin
I just need a chance

To hold the gear and
dance 
Just me and my car
Riding the road
under the moon
feeling a star
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 28, 2013 at 2:55 AM
Using a car analogy to drive a poem. Wow cool and super ride here in yor poem! Thumbs up poet. Pls do review my latest too.
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