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Driving Lessons

down this road and a further mile, lies success pot to make you smile, I have been down this road before, Son! so it’s true and not folklore!
chorus so drive with hope and drive with heart, go give your life car a good start, ahead is long hard winding road, succeed with life’s highway code!
vers 1 check mirror to see who’s around, wipe the glass before you hit ground, make sure the tank has fuel enough, demands of the road could be tough! vers 2 hear engine chug a cheerful note, happy hearts victory promote, use the clutch to ease into gear, good friend like clutch is useful ware!
chorus so drive with hope and drive with heart, go give your life car a good start, ahead is long hard winding road, succeed with life’s highway code
vers 3 go slow steady before you speed, you must pace it right to succeed, bouncy ride can harm the bearing, will put stress on power steering! vers 4 watch the road and mind other cars, some make their journeys into farce, let eyes and wisdom navigate, you will get there, be never late!
chorus so drive with hope and drive with heart, go give your life car a good start, ahead is long hard winding road, succeed with life’s highway code
vers 5 from time to time do use the break, stopping in life is not mistake, break on the tongue can stop a war, if used well you can be a star! vers 6 so my son please drive on and on, our journey starts when we are born, there are many who help on way, on fair road-to-success, you will stay!
chorus so drive with hope and drive with heart, go give your life car a good start, ahead is long hard winding road, succeed with life’s highway code
down this road and a further mile, lies success pot to make you smile, I have been down this road before, Son! so it’s true and not folklore! 1st placement Your advice to the youth poetry contest Edward Ibeh sponsored written 24/12/2020 Lyrics with 8 syllables each line with repeat chorus

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Date: 12/30/2020 7:49:00 PM
I am back to congratulate you, Krish, on your placement for this great piece of advice to young writers!! Wish you a Very Happy New Year!!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/30/2020 8:29:00 PM
thank you my friend! Blessings and Good wishes for a splendid year!!
Date: 12/30/2020 7:19:00 PM
Wow a Superb take Krish...Stering Life...Congrats on your Top Win....Have an awesome New Year :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/30/2020 8:28:00 PM
Thank you Carol! Your kind words make my day!!:) God bless you with a wonderful New Year!!
Date: 12/30/2020 5:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Krish!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/30/2020 8:26:00 PM
Thank you Mark! New Year Greetings to you!!:)
Date: 12/30/2020 3:26:00 PM
Excellent advice, and congratulations on your win, Krish.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/30/2020 8:26:00 PM
Thanks Jenna! Much obliged! Have a great new year!!
Date: 12/30/2020 11:26:00 AM
What a splendid, sagacious write this is, Krish:-) I really loved the car metaphor! So well-done! Congratulations on your deserving 1st win in my contest!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/30/2020 1:28:00 PM
Edward, thank you and so happy to be included amongst the winners! Good competitions inspire good poetry and this one was!! Cheers! and wishing you a great New Year ahead!!

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