Driving In My Car

Driving in my car, I love to do.
Singing songs, remembering better days with you.

How appropriate, the rains came.
Like cats and dogs, all is the same.

The visions of critters falling from the sky.
Oh, how I should be laughing, but now I cry.

The road seems endless around each bend.
The rains came, emotions blowing in the wind.

Life is full, but yet I am so alone.
I want to hold you, but you won't be coming home.

Skies so grey and dreary, mountains ahead.
Pretty yellow flowers peek through this day of dread.

Driving in my car, I love to do.
Singing songs, remembering better days with you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/1/2009 9:39:00 AM
simple yet beautiful. always remember and never forget because to forget is to die. love for the world, Ridge.
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Date: 1/10/2009 11:15:00 PM
Judy, I see YOU are a Versatile POETESS after reading YOU so far I like How the First and Last Stanzas are the same bringing the reader through the POEM Superb YOU might want to edit (Skis) so grey and dreary to (skies) YOUR Friend in POETRY...HG
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Date: 1/5/2009 9:50:00 PM
Driving can be good therapy... you can surround yourself with good music - cry, laugh, scream and nobody hears. it's cathartic. BRAVO Judy! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/5/2009 8:41:00 PM
beautiful write. i love the ending of this poem- love and peace.- james
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