Driving Drunk

A life time of pain
You have caused our family
Just by driving drunk
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sidney's "Any New or old haiku Will do" contest Erica. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 9:50 AM
A tragic end in any case, Erica. Congrats on your worthy poem win. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 9:04 PM
Congrats Erica on a fabulous win luv.. excellent poetry too...
Sweetheart Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 5:38 PM
WON 9th place...thankxxx,,,luv...
Dietrich Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 8:27 AM
It happened in our family too, Eric. My stepbrother, a really awesome guy, cut down by a drunk right before finishing law school! Congrats on your win in the contest.
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November 19, 2011 at 6:58 AM
Congratulations on the win with this wonderful poem, Erica
A  Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 12:05 AM
E.G, Congrats in my contest~SID
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October 27, 2009 at 4:21 PM
I can't imagine the pain that one feels when their family is hurt by person driving under the influence. Nicely expressed in this Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 4:07 PM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today. Thank you Erica. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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