Driver of Victory

Driver of Victory

Fate, destiny, and forever are evil sisters indeed.
They strive to trip and stumble, even the bravest of soldiers.
Courageous men that gather and pray,
Stronger on their knees, than giants.
A war that has no end is at hand.
The people have lost their gratefulness.
The tide of the unworthy has drowned the unwary.
Gather together and herald the King!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gist Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 5:01 PM
What we all strive for in following a true leader. Good one!
Desangre Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 2:56 PM
To gather strength on bended knees is to stand on legs unbuckled... very encourageble Ann. Fav~~~Niyna~~~
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August 17, 2019 at 4:39 PM
Oh wow... I love that legs..unbuckled... I may have to find a special place for that in a story...of a true hero indeed. Thank you for your kind comments. Have the very best of days. (tiny elves spreading little seeds that flower by dawn...along your path..)
Johnson Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Such an intriguing poem Ann. The ongoing juxtaposition and struggle's of the human spirit throughout our live's. And in the end, we have to give it to God. At least, that's what this reader got out of it. :) <3
Drowley Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 6:47 PM
Ann, I like this one. Especially the truth "stronger on their knees, than giants" when we remember the source of our strength! David
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July 29, 2019 at 7:28 PM
I often think of David... asking myself how I would fare against the giant, any giant... Ty for your kind comment. Have a truly lovely day. Ann
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 2:23 PM
I like your use of words contained in a terse verse Ann, Aloha William
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June 3, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Ty so kindly.
Blodgett Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 11:55 AM
Love this poem...........a strong statement about the struggle with how we feel about destiny.
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June 3, 2019 at 12:33 PM
ty... :)
Lee Sr. Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 8:07 AM
Beautifully done! I like shall be a "FAV" for me.. Write On...
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June 3, 2019 at 12:33 PM
You are so kind. Ty...
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