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DRIVE A day to drive, Coolant sunned, Last leaves scattered, On a pedal-fly, Ignition lust, On mother-piston, Pointed beams like bone fingers, I sit upright alone, Dark storm racing, Lightening spoken to. Weary of the voric-tendonces, The telly I left, From Demille's close-ups, Of Towers steel rain, Hand holding Jumpers, The day of the terrorist tools, At home I got car sick, When I was a replay witness, And our behooved king cow poke, Started his info-spin, Telling a child his dad would be ok, It's a noise vio-licked. Beget, to begot, A day to drive, Needing true air,radio off, For the ones gone

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Date: 1/15/2010 5:26:00 PM
Such novelty and creativity tells the subtlety of this genius ... it's a new style write with profound rhythm and choice of words and sentence structure. This is good stuff, wish I could talk to my brother face to face ... wish I could learn some of his style and negotiate his taste. A true genius.
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