Dripping Moon

The moon dripped like wax through 
the canopy of the pines, light and 
shadow were scattered across the
ground like playing cards.
The air was still, the scent of danger
there but difficult to locate, yet the 
nostrils still twitched in mistrust.
In knowing that this is their time, 
time to forage, snout and graze this 
fertile floor, it is also realized that 
this is the hour of the hunter, he 
who walks with feet shod in death.
In the absence of scent sound is the
ally the startled bird a friend and the
passing cloud a closet in which to
hide.
Cloven feet tread the fern, in this
tranquillity all is fostering, caring,
the procedure of life has no pace 
but always achieves its aim, natural
progression achieved by time and 
adaptation, little gained by the ever
presence of man, more so the rigid
adaptability to the elements given.
Yes I walk the forest at night, not
with rifle or bow, but with my dogs, 
dreams and respect.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/1/2013 1:55:00 PM
Daniel , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD
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Date: 12/31/2012 12:26:00 AM
i miss such beautiful poetry.May God bless you and yours.Have a peaceful New Year Daniel.Always in my prayers...Charna
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Date: 8/14/2011 11:23:00 PM
Congrats Daniel on your featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful write to share luv..
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Date: 8/14/2011 1:41:00 PM
This is beautiful. i loved it. i could feel and breathe the night with your words. really truly great! Windy
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Date: 8/10/2011 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations, Daniel, your awesome poem has won the first round. Wish you many successes. -Mohammad
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Date: 8/9/2011 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being once again featured this week before the final round of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest Daniel. The best to you in the contest. Carol
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Date: 8/8/2011 2:37:00 PM
Congrats Daniel on your featured poem this week on PS.. a wonderful write to share with us all my friend with luv...and many congrats on making it to first round competition with this piece in PS contest.. G.L. luv.. hoping u are well..u are SO missed here ..
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Date: 8/2/2011 8:10:00 PM
Congrats on making it through the first round..Sara
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Date: 8/2/2011 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Daniel. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:08:00 AM
Daniel, Congratulations on your poem's capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/30/2011 11:00:00 PM
Love this Daniel, glad i've managed to catch up again with you. Harry
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:08:00 AM
Very cool!
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Date: 3/7/2011 6:57:00 PM
Men, i love your poem. Nice title, great Imagery. Keep it bro.
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Date: 2/22/2011 4:24:00 AM
beautiful poem and title. .and i read your blog,you re in my prayers Daniel
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Date: 2/21/2011 4:51:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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Date: 2/21/2011 4:51:00 PM
Beautiful write on the dripping moon, Daniel
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Date: 2/21/2011 4:06:00 PM
Awesome Write Daniel. Excellent imagery ...began reading like a novel and I took the trip and never left the farm. A breath of fresh air in this day's reads.
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