Drip, Drip

Drip, drip is the sound of my tears 

When you lived out my fears

Drip, drip is the sound of your blood 

Before your body made that thud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 28, 2008 at 1:00 PM
An interesting and chilling write. Eerie in concept and composition. A poem that forces the reader to raise an eyebrow, contemplate and read the poem again. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Peace always, John
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December 27, 2008 at 5:47 PM
such a sad and painful write, I am not sure if this is recent or not, but in time you will heal, take care D-nyce
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December 27, 2008 at 2:42 PM
An eerie poem that has that Edgar Alan Poe feel. Effective title. Scary thought effective portrayed. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing. I hope you have a wonderful New Year. Karen
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