Drink When Thirsty

Within a vast sea 
under a calm and distant sky
is a secret solace known to few.
This is a place of peace, 
silence, and tranquility.
Here dwells knowledge in the purity of living, 
simply breathing life into a glorious texture of emotional bliss. 

High on the oldest tree are the words Drink when thirsty.
Masked phantoms move past, 
with a ceaseless breeze against their backs. 
They speak in riddles with jigsaw mouths, 
in mirror eyes they watch themselves.
Evening falls again. 
Day has closed her eye to another freckled veil of starlit hue.
A memory, now lightly nudging my shoulder,.. 
I see again their dances,.. around autumn fires,.. 
when the forest floor smelled of dry leaves, 
and the moon spilt shadows though naked trees.
Moistened now I drink life's sorrow, 
I tastes life's joy, 
and death awaits with menacing indifference.


Written by my husband Thielus.
A. Green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bien Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 7:06 AM
Fantastic write..very descriptive and visual! Soupmail, Amy.
Green Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 9:52 AM
His writing is all surreal and symbolic- very hard to classify. He amazed me when he brought these out last night, I had never read them. He wrote them during his "philosophical phase" about 10 years ago.
Murphy Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 9:22 AM
VERY NICE WRITE WONDERFUL TO SEE HUSBAND AND WIFE WRITE POETRY FOR DOUBLE TALENT MAKES EXCELLENT WRITTING FALESHIA
Bathsheba Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 9:21 AM
Congrats to your husband Amy - This write has some fantastic imagery going on - I really like this so much - It has great depth and hidden knowledge coursing through its veins - A trully fabulous share -:)
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