Drink and Drugs

I LOVED TO GO OUT ON A FRIDAY NIGHT.
BUT ONCE DRUNK YOU KNEW THERE WAS GOING TO BE A FIGHT.
YOU GET THESE GROUPS,AND YOU GET THESE GANGS.
ALL THEY WANT TO DO IS GIVE SOME-ONE A BANG,STRAIGHT IN THE HEAD.
IT SEEMS SO MUCH FUN WHEN THEY ARE ALL TOGETHER.
BUT WHEN SOME-ONE DIES,THEY GOT TO LIVE WITH IT FOREVER.
SOME-ONES SON OR SOME-ONES DAD.
WHEN THE FAMILY RECEIVE THE NEWS, THEY FEEL SO SAD.
DRINK IN IT SELF IS A POWERFULL DRUG.
AND IF IT GETS TO THIS STAGE, THEN YOUR THE MUG
YEARS IN JAIL,JUST WONT BE NICE,
ALL FOR WHAT, JUST 1 SILLY FIGHT,
IF YOU ARE CLEVER AND A LITTLE BIT BRIGHT.
YOU WILL KEEP AWAY FROM DRUGS,AND WONT HAVE TO FIGHT,
I HOPE YOU HEAR WHAT I HAVE TO SAY.
AS I DONT WANT IT TO BE YOU WHO ENDS UP THIS WAY

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/12/2009 4:21:00 PM
Powerful and appropriate message. Everyone needs to hear it. Godbless you during this holiday season.
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Date: 12/12/2009 11:47:00 AM
Strong message, today seems to be all about Gangs and violence, when will it end, too many kids killed. The message is good and strong, the flow is good. The imagery takes us where you want us to go, but I do not like all caps, makes the poem look incomplete. Judy Riley
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Date: 12/12/2009 11:41:00 AM
wisdom. john h loving iii
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