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Drifting Away

2-24-10 I'm a castaway On a ship far away Everyone is gone, And I'm the only one. Ever so slightly, the boat drifts on... Drenched in the brackish sorrow, I wait for nothing but the morrow If you care - turn your eyes to the sea There is all the tears I have shed for thee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/5/2012 3:46:00 PM
Dear Laura, Another Amazing Write I admire YOUR work LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 8/11/2011 9:14:00 PM
I loved it! It touched my heart...aaawwww....<3
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Date: 8/11/2011 8:46:00 PM
Terrific write lovely Lady, I enjoyed...with love...old Jack
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