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Drifting

d r i f t i n g in a quiet morning, the clouds gather light, softening edges of the sky with pale silver breath that folds into itself~ slow and tender, carrying dawn across the treetops in one bright wandering sigh before they thin again into open air and depart
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Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2026 at 7:20 AM
- Beautiful sight, Sara :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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September 25, 2026 at 4:54 AM
This poem beautifully captures the serene and gentle movement of clouds at dawn, dear Sara. The imagery is soft and calming, creating an almost meditative experience. It's like you can see the sky slowly waking up!
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