Drifters of the Breeze

Drifting on the breeze,
white wings carve the salted air,
echoes of the sea.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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May 11, 2025 at 4:04 PM
Not stolen, you've given breath to this one, Alesia. Beautiful.
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May 18, 2025 at 12:24 PM
That’s such a touching way to put it, Paige--thank you. I love the idea of giving breath to something weightless. I’m so glad it spoke to you.
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May 3, 2025 at 12:04 PM
The breeze of your beauty befits the body of my burnished beliefs which rise to meet the direction of smooth moving desire that you carry with the care of a companion's compassion...J.A.B.
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May 11, 2025 at 12:06 PM
Justin, your words are pure poetry in themselves--what a beautiful and generous reflection. I'm honored that Drifters of the Breeze stirred something so eloquent in you. Thank you for sharing your heart in this way--truly appreciated!
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