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Drifters of the Breeze

Drifting on the breeze, white wings carve the salted air, echoes of the sea.

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/11/2025 4:04:00 PM

Not stolen, you've given breath to this one, Alesia. Beautiful.

Alesia Leach
Date: 5/18/2025 12:24:00 PM

That’s such a touching way to put it, Paige--thank you. I love the idea of giving breath to something weightless. I’m so glad it spoke to you.

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/3/2025 12:04:00 PM

The breeze of your beauty befits the body of my burnished beliefs which rise to meet the direction of smooth moving desire that you carry with the care of a companion's compassion...J.A.B.

Alesia Leach
Date: 5/11/2025 12:06:00 PM

Justin, your words are pure poetry in themselves--what a beautiful and generous reflection. I'm honored that Drifters of the Breeze stirred something so eloquent in you. Thank you for sharing your heart in this way--truly appreciated!