Drifted Deep

Drifted deep in wintry dark 
she's in decline, as useless 
as a sailboat in a hurricane.
Once a haven for hikers, 
a shelter for stalwarts and strays
'til the mountain gave summons,
now forlorn and disregarded, 
like a maiden aunt, too old and without purpose, 
though winsome in her former days
when she was quite the prize, 
the belle of every ball, envied by all. 
"If those walls could speak!" they say,
as the hikers pass her by,
never offering a second glance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 30, 2013 at 8:05 AM
Dear Kieth- Every line outshines the previous. I am awestruck once again. love, Kathy p.s soup mail
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April 19, 2013 at 6:24 AM
Keith; this is a beauty of a poem. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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April 19, 2013 at 3:59 AM
Another Great work from you Keith... Bravo!~A.O
Sivey Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 4:13 PM
This is a brilliant write my friend! I am delighted to have read this amazing poem, What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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