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Drift Away

"Sitting by my window watching the world pass by I close my eyes and drift away to a place where we could fly My heart is warm with thoughts of you, I bide my time till our hearts are true"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2012 9:07:00 AM

Michael, I was having trouble finding a new one of yours to comment on, so I came back to your first page here at Soup and found this little gem!! It's your second poem ever. I had commented on the first one already!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/26/2011 8:43:00 AM

My oh My... See, no need to doubt your wordings. They all penned, written and spoken massively! :)

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/13/2010 8:45:00 AM

Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/12/2010 12:20:00 PM

Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer! Love , Adeleke

Janette Fisher

Date: 6/9/2010 11:18:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/7/2010 8:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Michael. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/6/2010 7:04:00 PM

Congrats Michael on your winning poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful choice to share with us all.. with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

Date: 6/6/2010 2:35:00 PM

Oh for those true hearts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Nice reflection. Enjoy your honor. Karen

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/18/2010 8:21:00 AM

this is great i loved it heartfelt i could feel your longing! i have often done this exactly waiting for hubby to get home from work. this was an amazing write for such a short piece, and it was an enjoyable read!=)Jo