Drift Away

"Sitting by my window watching the world pass by
 I close my eyes and drift away to a place where we could fly
 My heart is warm with thoughts of you, I bide my time till our
 hearts are true"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 9:07 AM
Michael, I was having trouble finding a new one of yours to comment on, so I came back to your first page here at Soup and found this little gem!! It's your second poem ever. I had commented on the first one already!
Minardi Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 8:43 AM
My oh My... See, no need to doubt your wordings. They all penned, written and spoken massively! :)
Spence Sr Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 8:45 AM
Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
Adeite Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer! Love , Adeleke
Fisher Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 11:18 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Michael. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 7:04 PM
Congrats Michael on your winning poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful choice to share with us all.. with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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June 6, 2010 at 2:35 PM
Oh for those true hearts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Nice reflection. Enjoy your honor. Karen
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 8:21 AM
this is great i loved it heartfelt i could feel your longing! i have often done this exactly waiting for hubby to get home from work. this was an amazing write for such a short piece, and it was an enjoyable read!=)Jo
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