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Drift

Morning fog scrolls amid lonely hills scarlet rays of wonder sultry bead dissipating breaths mist in prelude offering up a delicate canvas of need drenched at attention mid stare reflections begging to be revealed all of life's secrets soon to bare painted corners of blushed lips curl, in the drawing of your way hushed the half-beats of my drum crave, welcoming in a new day and when the moments lay dry drift into the balance of my eye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/30/2017 6:20:00 AM
Drifting into the beautiful sensations of a dawning day...lovely! Regards // paul
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Date: 10/26/2017 1:03:00 PM
Lovely lilting metered poem, Tim. The interlude stanza's are sensational. You're at the top of your poetic game w/this outstanding write, my friend. A must-save fave for sure. Aurora bright poetry. Love and more love always.
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Date: 10/26/2017 2:50:00 AM
Nothing inspires me like nature. This is lovely Tim! : )
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Date: 10/25/2017 11:19:00 PM
Very romantic, also makes me think of Ireland for some reason!
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Date: 10/25/2017 7:41:00 PM
Stunning Tim!...this piece is like a beautifully brushed painting that captures the eyes. Have a great day Tim :)
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Date: 10/25/2017 7:19:00 PM
You are taking over from Chris with your romantic early morning poems Tim, another gem flowing from your pen:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/25/2017 6:39:00 PM
Well chosen words--very poetic lines--well done Tim!
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Date: 10/25/2017 1:28:00 PM
Fluid and beautiful :) xomo!
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