Drenched

I get so wet
As I toil and sweat
And I get so drenched
As I get so wrenched

Do you get wet
As you toil and sweat
Or even get drenched
As you get so wrenched

When I get wet
From the toil and sweat
I get a lot of power
From a very good shower

And when I get drenched
From being so wrenched
I follow my path
To a very good bath

If you get wet 
From your toil and sweat
Use your own power
To go have a nice shower

And after you are drenched
From getting so wrenched
Maybe follow your path
To a very good bath
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 9, 2009 at 5:00 PM
It is definitely RHYME ;). Light & Love
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