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Dreamy Paradises

My dearest, be my love, That special gift from above, Together, let's join our hands, And live as love commands, In faith, joyfulness and peace, Let's enjoy our romantic caprice, Our love's of costliest prices, Be my garden of spices, Use all your amorous devices, Take me to dreamy paradises. 04/02/19

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Date: 4/10/2019 5:26:00 AM
so beautiful sweet Jo! thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 4/7/2019 1:52:00 PM
wonderful and romantic. You did so well with this form. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 4/2/2019 4:58:00 PM
Wonderful write Jo... GL in the contest..
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Date: 4/2/2019 2:32:00 PM
Very well said, my friend, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/2/2019 11:53:00 AM
Oh, I like this, Jo. You pulled off an engaging poem that stands out as an original despite how old the theme of romance is. I love your rhymes in the last 4 lines; the whole poem works beautifully. I have missed reading you, so hard to visit all those whose writing I enjoy. I know you know what I mean. I hope all is golden in your world. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 4/2/2019 9:13:00 AM
Love can capture a heart before it is even aware. Beautiful Jo! : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/2/2019 8:55:00 AM
So beautiful..lovely flow and rhythm..a winning poem your wrote, Jo.
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Date: 4/2/2019 8:11:00 AM
Lovely verse my friend...great entry Jo...I'm OK, just life catches up with us...so we slow down a bit...how are you doing?...love & light...^WW^...happy endings
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