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Dreamscape Rain

He sprinted through an awesome barrow, skirting a stone. The music of July night is hidden behind hazel leaves. I smile and watch young people play from the walker garden. Indeed, the downpour plunged, beating on my roof tied a tin drum. Choking out the bunny's smell in the extents of the forest. July fireflies long for the moon as floods ascend from onset. The banished euphoric world is an isolation labyrinth. Watching the waters surface, the days pass suddenly of shadows. Conscious at dawn, the moon sails with me to the morning seashores.
1St Place Contest Winner Written: September 25, 2021 Checked by: SC.COM Your Best Sijo Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula
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Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 1:56 PM
I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 12:37 AM
Lasaad, captivating work that you've spun here, lucid continuity pours throughout! Exceptionally done my friend, Aloha!
Skelly Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 1:29 AM
Sailing with the moon, lovely image Lasaad...Delice
Buhagiar Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 6:45 AM
Seems such memories will not be forgotten.
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 5:40 AM
Nothing better than the hues of moon sailing on seashores.
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