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He sprinted through an awesome barrow, skirting a stone. The music of July night is hidden behind hazel leaves. I smile and watch young people play from the walker garden. Indeed, the downpour plunged, beating on my roof tied a tin drum. Choking out the bunny's smell in the extents of the forest. July fireflies long for the moon as floods ascend from onset. The banished euphoric world is an isolation labyrinth. Watching the waters surface, the days pass suddenly of shadows. Conscious at dawn, the moon sails with me to the morning seashores.
1St Place Contest Winner Written: September 25, 2021 Checked by: SC.COM Your Best Sijo Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Date: 10/15/2021 1:56:00 PM
I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 10/14/2021 12:37:00 AM
Lasaad, captivating work that you've spun here, lucid continuity pours throughout! Exceptionally done my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 9/27/2021 1:29:00 AM
Sailing with the moon, lovely image Lasaad...Delice
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Date: 9/26/2021 6:45:00 AM
Seems such memories will not be forgotten.
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Date: 9/26/2021 5:40:00 AM
Nothing better than the hues of moon sailing on seashores.
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